Here she comes part
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I am walking toward and it feels so natural. She is looking at the paintings posted on the wall. I stop a few steps from her. The sun is already high in the sky. She turns around and sees me.
- Good morning.
- Good morning.
I extend my hand to her for a formal introduction. I feel so strange and nervous. After all, it is just meeting a new friend in school, but it seems to be so much more. It feels like meeting somebody I have always known or always wanted to know better.
- Good morning, my name is Suky.
I see the surprise in her eyes, her pupils dilate. I realize how clear her lenses are. She smiles and extends her hand.
- Good morning, my names is Sanaa.
We shake hands and smile together. I feel her hand so warm and comfortable.
- I like your style.
- I like your style.
I take a look at the painting she is examining with so much attention. It is a landscape, the student put so much time and attention, work and details to produce a impressionist scene of our garden. The light is coming through the leaves. It looks almost magic. I catch myself trying to touch the painting to feel the little touches, feel the paint. I am happy it is covered. Sanaa turns to me.
- I had the same reaction, I felt like touching it and caught myself up. This is so lively. The shades of green gives that special feeling, I wait to see if....
- He will make it a series.
She snaps her fingers.
- Exactly. I am happy to meet somebody who I can talk about things like that to.
- Nice to meet you too.
We both smile and start walking toward the garden.
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This is almost like a short story of sorts, feels like the beginning of one anyhow, and shows you have a great deal of creativity in your writing.
I'm not sure what she's walking towards in the beginning there, but it is interesting to thin about, and I have no idea how the lady looks like, but that two appeals to my senses somehow.
Nice form of prose, almost can even pass for a poem if broke down into fragments of lines, I guess. Cool stuff Nialee.
hey thanks for mentioning me Nia.and yes this was beautiful, though you will have to write me a mail explaining the context, as i want to see whether the imagery i developed when i read this matches the context you wrote it in.
keep writing friend and may you never have any troubles.
NiaLee Hub Author 3 months ago
Hello hubbers, it feels good to be back and I owe it to Neeleshkulkarni's new hub that woke me up. I have been pretty busy and tired...but I realize how much the depression of not writing has been part of my troubles. I wish you all a good week and look forward to reading you. NiaLee Love and peace